I think this will end up looking much better.
I am also trying to decide what color to make the clothing and the background. I'm thinking about using colors 442 and 446 or 545, 456 and 546d.
I'm not certain about the background yet. Maybe a mixture of the colors 321, 323, 325 and 325b...
In any case it will mean another order from smalti.com - where these images of smalti colors came from.